The new script


I know im not alone. (..) They say there is  much bigger creaturs that lurk in the forest. (..)Myths of children disappearing from their beds when they were asleep. (..) Children misbehaving were told that they would be given to the forest.  Many villagers have spoken of coming across  animals shredded to pieces. (..) From limb. (..) To limb. I feel safe in this forest for some reason. But I always feel I’m being watched. (..) I’ve seen things. Walking through here. Animals far bigger and faster than any deer. (..) They move swiftly through the trees. They know there way around here. Like me. But like me they like to be left alone. (..) I don’t know what they are but they don’t want to be found.  (..) they know when I’m here. They all know when I’m here. (scream)

(..) - Pause

When I did the script of what she was going to say I thought it was rather long so I shortened it so that it fitted the film. I think this was far better than the other script because I didnt htink of the timing and the other script was more for a film that if I had 5 minutes so I had to shorten it for 2 minutes and I prefered this as this was in the orginal script but the 3rd section.

Thinking twice about the script and changing it had shown that I have thought about this and to make the film better. It also shows my progression through the creating of the film because I thought about one thing at the beginnong of the film and through changes and situations that have occured I have slightly altered what my original idea and how I have overcome it.